Twisty-turny stories (engaging practical writing activity)
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What I Like
What I Like...
(titled by Kim Hyun-jin, written by Cha Yoo-bin, Kim Eun-jung, Kim Ji-young, Joo Un-jin, Park Sang-yung, Jang Deuk-ju, Jeong Mi-jin)
I had secrets. It is not earth-shattering like American bombing into Japan. I have a boy friend, Ken. We look like Barbie and Ken. I told him that I weighed 50kg but actually I weigh 60kg. You know only one number is changed. I really felt happy when he believed my lie.
One day Ken and I went to the amusement park. We wanted to ride toy horses. There were a row of students in front of them. We also stood in line to ride them.
Then, finally we came to ride toy horses. But as soon as I got on it, it started to make a noise and become unstable and then it was broken at last. How embarrassing and humiliating it was! It seemed like everyone around me laughed at me including my Ken!
I couldn't stand crying. Ken came to know I weighed much. What if your girl friend broke the toy horse due to her heavy weight? I thought Ken wanted to break up with me. But at that time, he hugged me and said, "Darling, don't cry. It's not because you weighed too much but because it was made bad. And what I like is what you are, not what you pretended to be. I love you although you weigh much and you are not beautiful. Always your all is lovely to me." I was moved and regretted lying to him. 'Thank you, Ken. Although you'll be old and fat, I'll love you forever because what I like is also what you are."
(I'll put these three stories below because I thought they were not coherent with the first story a little. But they are good and interesting stories.)
I like this season, the end of March because beautiful blossom on the trees and in the field really starts. Above all, I like the white pink cherry blossom. I have some memory about cherry blossom. Do you guess?
Everyone has a skeleton in his chest; like this old saying goes, I myself have a lot of secrets. It could be dirty, immoral or about sexual fantasy I have. Whether it is desirable or not, having a secret makes our lives more interesting. The girl you had crushed on but never told how you felt, taking a bill from your mother's wallet, wetting your pants even when you were a 7th grader and so on so far.
What I like is ...money. I can go anywhere I want. I can have anything I want to buy. I think I can do anything that I want to do!
I really want to win a lotto. Some told me the numbers. I'll share that money with you. Call me!^^
(titled by Kim Hyun-jin, written by Cha Yoo-bin, Kim Eun-jung, Kim Ji-young, Joo Un-jin, Park Sang-yung, Jang Deuk-ju, Jeong Mi-jin)
I had secrets. It is not earth-shattering like American bombing into Japan. I have a boy friend, Ken. We look like Barbie and Ken. I told him that I weighed 50kg but actually I weigh 60kg. You know only one number is changed. I really felt happy when he believed my lie.
One day Ken and I went to the amusement park. We wanted to ride toy horses. There were a row of students in front of them. We also stood in line to ride them.
Then, finally we came to ride toy horses. But as soon as I got on it, it started to make a noise and become unstable and then it was broken at last. How embarrassing and humiliating it was! It seemed like everyone around me laughed at me including my Ken!
I couldn't stand crying. Ken came to know I weighed much. What if your girl friend broke the toy horse due to her heavy weight? I thought Ken wanted to break up with me. But at that time, he hugged me and said, "Darling, don't cry. It's not because you weighed too much but because it was made bad. And what I like is what you are, not what you pretended to be. I love you although you weigh much and you are not beautiful. Always your all is lovely to me." I was moved and regretted lying to him. 'Thank you, Ken. Although you'll be old and fat, I'll love you forever because what I like is also what you are."
(I'll put these three stories below because I thought they were not coherent with the first story a little. But they are good and interesting stories.)
I like this season, the end of March because beautiful blossom on the trees and in the field really starts. Above all, I like the white pink cherry blossom. I have some memory about cherry blossom. Do you guess?
Everyone has a skeleton in his chest; like this old saying goes, I myself have a lot of secrets. It could be dirty, immoral or about sexual fantasy I have. Whether it is desirable or not, having a secret makes our lives more interesting. The girl you had crushed on but never told how you felt, taking a bill from your mother's wallet, wetting your pants even when you were a 7th grader and so on so far.
What I like is ...money. I can go anywhere I want. I can have anything I want to buy. I think I can do anything that I want to do!
I really want to win a lotto. Some told me the numbers. I'll share that money with you. Call me!^^

Joo Un-jin- Wizard

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My First Teaching Experience
titled by Joo Unjin,
written by Kim Boyeun, Kim Jin-young, Jung jieun, Jeong Seongyoon, Moon Namsuk, Kim YoungAh, Kim Hyojin.
Today it was my first day to teach English in school. Actually, it made me nervous, so I had to prepare a lot of things for class. I dressed up and arrived at school on time. I felt my heart beating quickly and my face blushed. With my legs crossed, I tried to calm down my restless mind. As soon as I start to teach, the front door opened slowly. Rain, the world star, walked into the class.
It was unbelievable! It seemed that I was dreaming of him. Also it was likely that I would die of extreme nervousness. In addition, I was so embarrassed that I totally forgot how to say hello at the moment. After a few seconds of silence, he suddenly started to laugh and then said to us "Hi! nice to meet you".
You know what? I couldn't say anything in front of him. We managed to shake hands with each other as politely as possible. The director of a new TV program asked me to accept Rain as one of my students in class for today.
I started to introduce him to the rest of students before studying. However, there was a rule in class; Only English is allowed to be used during English class, so I had to explain any grammar rules in English. Smiling all the time, he suddenly suggested some possible activities such as riddles and storytelling. I was a little surprised, but I had no choice but to accept it. It was definitely unexpected because this kind of thing was not on my list.
As all the teachers were curious about how well each student work out, so I wanted to know the new student's English ability. However, he spoke so fast that I couldn't understand what he was saying exactly. Surprised at his fluency and accurate pronunciations, I sometimes made a couple of mistakes in pronouncing difficult words and even made a pause for breath. It was shameful that his English skills outdid mine in every aspect. At last, the 50-minute class ended up not achieving the objects of lesson 1. I said to myself 'This cannot be true!'.
Would that I dreamed of it! Fortunately, I realized the reality; it was a dream. When I woke up, I couldn't see anything in the dark. Only ticking sound from my watch was heard. Actually, I was in a bad situation; I didn't still pass the test to be a teacher. The mental pressure in my mind caused me to think of the frightened dream.
Frankly speaking, I experienced in breaking up with a ex-boyfriend who is now dating with another girl. Until my hurt get recovered, it took several months. However, I wouldn't let myself think it over and over because there remained many things to do. All of a sudden, I was told that the Ministry of Education made an announcement to adopt new teachers. It said that the number of new English teachers was going to increase this year, which resulted from the introduction of new English curriculums, Immersion Education Program. That announcement was enough to motivate me to study more than usual! I prayed God for me to make it.
written by Kim Boyeun, Kim Jin-young, Jung jieun, Jeong Seongyoon, Moon Namsuk, Kim YoungAh, Kim Hyojin.
Today it was my first day to teach English in school. Actually, it made me nervous, so I had to prepare a lot of things for class. I dressed up and arrived at school on time. I felt my heart beating quickly and my face blushed. With my legs crossed, I tried to calm down my restless mind. As soon as I start to teach, the front door opened slowly. Rain, the world star, walked into the class.
It was unbelievable! It seemed that I was dreaming of him. Also it was likely that I would die of extreme nervousness. In addition, I was so embarrassed that I totally forgot how to say hello at the moment. After a few seconds of silence, he suddenly started to laugh and then said to us "Hi! nice to meet you".
You know what? I couldn't say anything in front of him. We managed to shake hands with each other as politely as possible. The director of a new TV program asked me to accept Rain as one of my students in class for today.
I started to introduce him to the rest of students before studying. However, there was a rule in class; Only English is allowed to be used during English class, so I had to explain any grammar rules in English. Smiling all the time, he suddenly suggested some possible activities such as riddles and storytelling. I was a little surprised, but I had no choice but to accept it. It was definitely unexpected because this kind of thing was not on my list.
As all the teachers were curious about how well each student work out, so I wanted to know the new student's English ability. However, he spoke so fast that I couldn't understand what he was saying exactly. Surprised at his fluency and accurate pronunciations, I sometimes made a couple of mistakes in pronouncing difficult words and even made a pause for breath. It was shameful that his English skills outdid mine in every aspect. At last, the 50-minute class ended up not achieving the objects of lesson 1. I said to myself 'This cannot be true!'.
Would that I dreamed of it! Fortunately, I realized the reality; it was a dream. When I woke up, I couldn't see anything in the dark. Only ticking sound from my watch was heard. Actually, I was in a bad situation; I didn't still pass the test to be a teacher. The mental pressure in my mind caused me to think of the frightened dream.
Frankly speaking, I experienced in breaking up with a ex-boyfriend who is now dating with another girl. Until my hurt get recovered, it took several months. However, I wouldn't let myself think it over and over because there remained many things to do. All of a sudden, I was told that the Ministry of Education made an announcement to adopt new teachers. It said that the number of new English teachers was going to increase this year, which resulted from the introduction of new English curriculums, Immersion Education Program. That announcement was enough to motivate me to study more than usual! I prayed God for me to make it.
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Kim Jin-Young- Wizard

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The First Day at School
titled by Hwang Yunkyoung
written by Ryu JeongA, Park Bongkyoung, Lee Pilsu, Bae Haesol, Kang Eunmi, Cho Eunjin, Han Kyoungjae.
10 years ago, I went to school with my dad for the first time. In the playground there were a lot of other fellow kids holding their parents hands. However, my mom was not coming with me because she had to go to work. When I was guided to classroom, I saw my mom playing the piano in the next classroom. What happened?
Oh~ my god!! My mom was a music teacher at this elementary school. I couldn't believe my eyes. By the way, how couldn't she tell me she would go to the same school that I would go to. I wondered why she had not told me that. Though confused by the mysterious reason my mom's being there, still I was happy with the fact that I could be around her for the next couple of years.
The class bell rang off. Everybody took a seat. It was a music class and my mom was the music teacher. But she didn't seem to see me in the class. Actually she treated me like any other students. I couldn't understand why she was acting like that. At any rate, I talked to myself I would ask her the reason when I go home.
After school, when I went to my house, I was looking fo my mom to ask the reason why she didn't tell about the happening. But I couldn't find my mom. So I started to yelling at my mom. "Mom~~Mom~~, Where are you now?" At the moment my mom appeared. Oh~my god!! That was not my mom but my dad who was playing the piano in women's clothes, and even it was my music teacher's clothes today in my music class.
Oh, I couldn't believe what I saw. I felt like that I had a nightmare. Whare are my mom and why my dad wore women's clothes? I didn't want to talk with anyone. So I said to him, "Leave me alone, go away!" I felt isolated from the world. Everyone, even my family betrayed me. They didn't tell the real truth to me. I couldn't handle all these happenings around me.
To make matter worse, the man in my mom's clothes wasn't my dad at all. His eyes were shining with red beam and he made strange laughing. He even didn't know my name. I started to run to my room upstairs. "Oh~ God! Where are my parents? Why this strange thing happens to me? Today was my first day at school!!!!" I screamed. Strangely, however hard I ran, my room became farther from me. And then , there were strange dark pit between me and my room.
All of sudden, I heard the bell rang again, and I woke up in my school desk. Yes, fortunatley it was my dream and all of these things happened in my dream. I stood up and ran to meet my mom. My mom was at the teachers' room looking at me with smile. Also she explianed to me why she and my dad didn't tell me the truth. They just made me surprise event for the first day present at school. Finally I felt relieved and happy with my mom. After school, I went home with mom and we had great time eating some cookies. My first day at school was really fantastic and I would never forget that day.
written by Ryu JeongA, Park Bongkyoung, Lee Pilsu, Bae Haesol, Kang Eunmi, Cho Eunjin, Han Kyoungjae.
10 years ago, I went to school with my dad for the first time. In the playground there were a lot of other fellow kids holding their parents hands. However, my mom was not coming with me because she had to go to work. When I was guided to classroom, I saw my mom playing the piano in the next classroom. What happened?
Oh~ my god!! My mom was a music teacher at this elementary school. I couldn't believe my eyes. By the way, how couldn't she tell me she would go to the same school that I would go to. I wondered why she had not told me that. Though confused by the mysterious reason my mom's being there, still I was happy with the fact that I could be around her for the next couple of years.
The class bell rang off. Everybody took a seat. It was a music class and my mom was the music teacher. But she didn't seem to see me in the class. Actually she treated me like any other students. I couldn't understand why she was acting like that. At any rate, I talked to myself I would ask her the reason when I go home.
After school, when I went to my house, I was looking fo my mom to ask the reason why she didn't tell about the happening. But I couldn't find my mom. So I started to yelling at my mom. "Mom~~Mom~~, Where are you now?" At the moment my mom appeared. Oh~my god!! That was not my mom but my dad who was playing the piano in women's clothes, and even it was my music teacher's clothes today in my music class.
Oh, I couldn't believe what I saw. I felt like that I had a nightmare. Whare are my mom and why my dad wore women's clothes? I didn't want to talk with anyone. So I said to him, "Leave me alone, go away!" I felt isolated from the world. Everyone, even my family betrayed me. They didn't tell the real truth to me. I couldn't handle all these happenings around me.
To make matter worse, the man in my mom's clothes wasn't my dad at all. His eyes were shining with red beam and he made strange laughing. He even didn't know my name. I started to run to my room upstairs. "Oh~ God! Where are my parents? Why this strange thing happens to me? Today was my first day at school!!!!" I screamed. Strangely, however hard I ran, my room became farther from me. And then , there were strange dark pit between me and my room.
All of sudden, I heard the bell rang again, and I woke up in my school desk. Yes, fortunatley it was my dream and all of these things happened in my dream. I stood up and ran to meet my mom. My mom was at the teachers' room looking at me with smile. Also she explianed to me why she and my dad didn't tell me the truth. They just made me surprise event for the first day present at school. Finally I felt relieved and happy with my mom. After school, I went home with mom and we had great time eating some cookies. My first day at school was really fantastic and I would never forget that day.

Han Kyoung Jae- Wizard

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My favorite things
My favorite things
written by Jung Ji-eun , Moon Nam-suk, Kim Young-ah, Kim Jin -young, Park Bo-yun , Park Ji-hyun, Lee Hye-jin
There are lots of things that I like in my life. At first, I like coffee so much. I think it is very hard for me to live without it. I've already addicted to it. Smelling tea or coffee, I relax and take a rest with music. I prefer thinking good things to bad things. So thinking about my favorite things of my life makes me feel better. Even though life deceives me, myself.
Once I tried to limit the amount of coffee I drink but it wasn't easy. At first I didn't really know the true or deep taste of real coffee and just enjoyed the smell of it until I was mature enough to drink it. And I still like my coffee with much milk or syrup in it. Speaking of coffee, it's really hard to drink espresso even though the cup looks so tiny and cute.
Meanwhile, sometimes I prefer to be alone rather than to be with people. I really love coffee in other ways; when I encounter difficulties to endure, I drink coffee. It doesn't matter how many cups I drink a day. At first, I tried to soothe myself drinking coffee. Now it became something harmful in my stomach.
However, We have only one life. What's happiness? I thought about this question, drinking my bitter espresso. Suddenly something comes up. I rushed outside, running to the coffee place and finally got a cup of coffee with lots of creams and caramel syrup. I drank a little bit. Oh! I felt heavenly. Yes! Yes! This is what life is! After that day I totally changed my mind.
The second thing I love is the smile of my students in the kindergarten. I'm so happy because I can enjoy my life with my favorite things. Mingling with people I like is also one of my favorite things. I'm more like people person, and I hate being alone or isolated. Whenever I'm so down or have some problems, I can get good advice from them and I feel much better or even relieved. The moment I'm chatting and having coffee with them is the best moment for me.
Two of my favorite things in my life are coffee and spending time with people I like. Then the most valuable and precious thing in my life is having a cup of coffee with my favorite people. hee-hee
We all have a right to make our lives beautiful and energetic! Even though We all have different types of characters, hobbies and taste, how about trying to enjoy doing our favorite things everyday and make our lives worth living~~! What are your favorite things? What do you want to do now? NOW! JUST DO IT!
My humble feedback about this activity....
I think it was a very good activity to write , as the professor said, without thinking it's a boring writing session. However, We should have had more understanding about this activity. I felt like many of us, of course including me, couldn't understand how to do this exactly. So I had a little bit of hard time to edit the writing according to the title and to keep the intention of the writers. I think many other people did, too.
I hope we have another chance to do it. ^^ I have had few chances to write for many years just teaching my students how to speak, listen and read having not much time to teach how to write. So at first It was really stressful when the professor told us to write and post more than one paragraph every week like 'opinion and prediction'. However, now I think it's a good chance to practice writing. We can learn from other classmates and from many practices. We have to write to survive. hee-hee ^^ Thank my professor, smart and diligent classmates for making me feel less stressful about writing and giving me chances to learn more. Have a nice week~~!!
written by Jung Ji-eun , Moon Nam-suk, Kim Young-ah, Kim Jin -young, Park Bo-yun , Park Ji-hyun, Lee Hye-jin
There are lots of things that I like in my life. At first, I like coffee so much. I think it is very hard for me to live without it. I've already addicted to it. Smelling tea or coffee, I relax and take a rest with music. I prefer thinking good things to bad things. So thinking about my favorite things of my life makes me feel better. Even though life deceives me, myself.
Once I tried to limit the amount of coffee I drink but it wasn't easy. At first I didn't really know the true or deep taste of real coffee and just enjoyed the smell of it until I was mature enough to drink it. And I still like my coffee with much milk or syrup in it. Speaking of coffee, it's really hard to drink espresso even though the cup looks so tiny and cute.
Meanwhile, sometimes I prefer to be alone rather than to be with people. I really love coffee in other ways; when I encounter difficulties to endure, I drink coffee. It doesn't matter how many cups I drink a day. At first, I tried to soothe myself drinking coffee. Now it became something harmful in my stomach.
However, We have only one life. What's happiness? I thought about this question, drinking my bitter espresso. Suddenly something comes up. I rushed outside, running to the coffee place and finally got a cup of coffee with lots of creams and caramel syrup. I drank a little bit. Oh! I felt heavenly. Yes! Yes! This is what life is! After that day I totally changed my mind.
The second thing I love is the smile of my students in the kindergarten. I'm so happy because I can enjoy my life with my favorite things. Mingling with people I like is also one of my favorite things. I'm more like people person, and I hate being alone or isolated. Whenever I'm so down or have some problems, I can get good advice from them and I feel much better or even relieved. The moment I'm chatting and having coffee with them is the best moment for me.
Two of my favorite things in my life are coffee and spending time with people I like. Then the most valuable and precious thing in my life is having a cup of coffee with my favorite people. hee-hee
We all have a right to make our lives beautiful and energetic! Even though We all have different types of characters, hobbies and taste, how about trying to enjoy doing our favorite things everyday and make our lives worth living~~! What are your favorite things? What do you want to do now? NOW! JUST DO IT!
I think it was a very good activity to write , as the professor said, without thinking it's a boring writing session. However, We should have had more understanding about this activity. I felt like many of us, of course including me, couldn't understand how to do this exactly. So I had a little bit of hard time to edit the writing according to the title and to keep the intention of the writers. I think many other people did, too.
I hope we have another chance to do it. ^^ I have had few chances to write for many years just teaching my students how to speak, listen and read having not much time to teach how to write. So at first It was really stressful when the professor told us to write and post more than one paragraph every week like 'opinion and prediction'. However, now I think it's a good chance to practice writing. We can learn from other classmates and from many practices. We have to write to survive. hee-hee ^^ Thank my professor, smart and diligent classmates for making me feel less stressful about writing and giving me chances to learn more. Have a nice week~~!!

Lee Hye Jin- Wizard

- Posts: 64
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A Day of Jason..
by Kim Ji-young, Joo Un-jin, Kim Bo-yeun, Kim Hyo-jin, Jung Ji-eun, Jeong Seong-yoon.
A Day of Jason
Jason is a very passionate professor teaching English at Kyung-book National University. Of course, he loves his job and students very much, but these days he feels kind of bored a little with his life, because it seems like everyday is the same and nothing exciting or fantastic is going to ever happen to him. He woke up this morning just like other days and started the day without any expectation. He had no idea about what would happen to him today.
During day, he just thought to learn magic might be interesting and even it might give him a little life change. So, he visited a magician who knows the way to be an invisible man. The magician listened to what he said very carefully and taught the way to him. Eventually, Jason became the invisible man and nobody could see him. First, he visited the house of the president of KNU, and he saw something shocking there.
That was the president of KNU was also preparing for being an invisible man. Actually, he also wanted something new and especially, he wanted to know how students feel about him and what he had done. So, Jason and the president went around campus together, but there were no one on campus.
Then, they decided to change their route, so they went to a pub near campus instead of just waiting for students to come. They stopped by several pubs and listened to what the students were talking over drinking, because they wanted to hear about students' opinions on themselves.
There were some students of Jason, and they just got a class with Jason today. So their topic was the assignment of the class. They said that Jason's class is pretty hard because there are lots of things to do, but absolutely they enjoyed it. Jason was happy with that, but their topic was moving to the school tuition and they were getting more serious and angry about it.
However, students tried to make themselves calm down because they knew speaking ill of someone behind is bad. Jason and the president learned many things through this experience. They tried to care students' opinion and give them better circumstances than before. This was such a great experience for them.
Suddenly, Jason woke up from his short time nap. It was weird, but he had a chance to look back his life through this dream. He was more sympathetic to his students during his class, and he could see and realize something new and different though it was just same class that he had had. He smiled from time to time remembering that dream and those stuffs that he'd listened in that dream, and that made students wonder.

Nam-suk- Flyer

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The Mystery of the Red Boss
The Mystery of the Red Boss
Written by Mi-hyun Park, Yunkyoung Hwang, Jeonga Ryu, Bongkyung Park, Pilsu Lee, Haesol Bae, Eunmi Kang and Eunjin Cho
He is always gloomy and quiet. No one knows his real name, so we call him "Red Boss." I don't know when people started to call hime like that. However, one thing that I do know about this is he always has red stuffs like a red hat, a red cane, a red shirt, etc.
He is not insane, though. He just wears red one and has many red things. However, one day, he showed up wearing a pair of white shoes, and the other day, in a blue shirt. After changing all the stuffs that he had one by one, he broke with red.
The boss is not called "Red Boss" anymore. Not only the color of his items but also his personality has changed in a good way. Now he has smile on his face most of the time, and even he kindly say hello to his employees in the morning. How could a person like him turn into a totally different person? Everybody working for him wondered the reason why. However, they still coudn't figure it out. Whatever the reason, people loved him much better than before. What happened to him? It's a mystery.
There was a very important incident that changed his favorite color 'red' to others. One night after finishing work, he went out for drinking with his employees. On that day, he dressed himself with all red. After the gathering, he was walking home when he suddenly saw a cat staring at him on the wall. Since he was drunk and surprised to see the mysterious animal, he tripped over a stone and fainted. He fell into a sleep; he started to have a nightmare.
In his dream, he was in the swimming pool which was full of blood. He was trying to swim forward, but he couldn't because of the sticky blood. He was very sad and miserable. Suddenly, one big guy in rainbow colors came to the pool and started to suck the whole blood. The boss passed out for several hours and woke up at a strange place.
After recovering himself, the boss started to have different feeling toward colors. As soon as he got home, he began to look for the clothes that he put in a warehouse; he put them there because they were not red. Every morning, whenever he tried to wear stuffs in red, he kept thinking of the rainbow guy. After that strange and yucky dream, he changed. The change started to appear by the way he wear clothes and other items; moreover, as his stuffs changed, his personality started to become different.
He is originally a very weak and shy person, but he has been just pretending to be stonger than anyone else in red stuffs. However, after the incident, he made up his mind to admit the way he is. Whether he was frustrated or not, he just faced himself naturally by trying on clothes in various colors. The age of red clothes was gone. He isn't "Red Boss" anymore. He began to be called "Honesty Boss" because he knew how to accept himself. Now the story of the "Red Boss" became a famous legend in his town and it encouraged many people who are shy and quiet.
Written by Mi-hyun Park, Yunkyoung Hwang, Jeonga Ryu, Bongkyung Park, Pilsu Lee, Haesol Bae, Eunmi Kang and Eunjin Cho
He is always gloomy and quiet. No one knows his real name, so we call him "Red Boss." I don't know when people started to call hime like that. However, one thing that I do know about this is he always has red stuffs like a red hat, a red cane, a red shirt, etc.
He is not insane, though. He just wears red one and has many red things. However, one day, he showed up wearing a pair of white shoes, and the other day, in a blue shirt. After changing all the stuffs that he had one by one, he broke with red.
The boss is not called "Red Boss" anymore. Not only the color of his items but also his personality has changed in a good way. Now he has smile on his face most of the time, and even he kindly say hello to his employees in the morning. How could a person like him turn into a totally different person? Everybody working for him wondered the reason why. However, they still coudn't figure it out. Whatever the reason, people loved him much better than before. What happened to him? It's a mystery.
There was a very important incident that changed his favorite color 'red' to others. One night after finishing work, he went out for drinking with his employees. On that day, he dressed himself with all red. After the gathering, he was walking home when he suddenly saw a cat staring at him on the wall. Since he was drunk and surprised to see the mysterious animal, he tripped over a stone and fainted. He fell into a sleep; he started to have a nightmare.
In his dream, he was in the swimming pool which was full of blood. He was trying to swim forward, but he couldn't because of the sticky blood. He was very sad and miserable. Suddenly, one big guy in rainbow colors came to the pool and started to suck the whole blood. The boss passed out for several hours and woke up at a strange place.
After recovering himself, the boss started to have different feeling toward colors. As soon as he got home, he began to look for the clothes that he put in a warehouse; he put them there because they were not red. Every morning, whenever he tried to wear stuffs in red, he kept thinking of the rainbow guy. After that strange and yucky dream, he changed. The change started to appear by the way he wear clothes and other items; moreover, as his stuffs changed, his personality started to become different.
He is originally a very weak and shy person, but he has been just pretending to be stonger than anyone else in red stuffs. However, after the incident, he made up his mind to admit the way he is. Whether he was frustrated or not, he just faced himself naturally by trying on clothes in various colors. The age of red clothes was gone. He isn't "Red Boss" anymore. He began to be called "Honesty Boss" because he knew how to accept himself. Now the story of the "Red Boss" became a famous legend in his town and it encouraged many people who are shy and quiet.

eunjin39- Wizard

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The worst happening today in the morning!
" The worst happening today in the morning! "
by Jeong Seong-Yoon, Ghost writer, Moon Nam-Suk, Kim Young-Ah, Kim Ji-Yong, Park Bo-Yun, Park Ji-Hyun
qqqqqqqqqqqqq (sorry, plz tell me your name)
Yesterday night, As soon as I got home after work, I tried to find some food.
Because I was so starving -at least I felt like that- I tried to make some finger food quickly. However, I couldn't find any clean dishes eventhough I was looking for it for several minutes. Since I hadn't washed the dishes for weeks, there was no containers to cook. Finally I gave up looking for the dishes and washing the dishes, decided to eat out with my friends.
But, unfortunately, I couldn't get in touch with any of my friends. It was getting darker and darker and
I was almost dying for hunger, so I gave up calling and went out alone to find something to eat. I was too exhausted, so that it was very hard to walk properly. Anyway, I walked and walked along the street.
And then...?? I can't remeber anything. When I opend my eyes it was in the morning. I was in a very strange place where I have never seen it before. I looked around carefully and found out it was hospital.
I found myself wearing a cast all over my body. I was so shocked and screamed. But I lost my voice so nobody answered to me.
I tried to organize my thoughts. I could guess something bad had happend to me. Frankly speaking, I am a drug addicted man. To be honest at this monent, I have to admit that what I really needed yesterday was drugs, not food. Several weeks have passed since my drug seller didn't give me any of them. I was insane. I made illusion in my mind and I couldn't recognize real or imaginary situation at that moment. I thought as if I was held in hostage by some stranger. Anyway... Sometime later, a nurse and a doctor came to see me.
But as I said before, I couldn't move my body and make any voice.
I trie to move my face muscles in order to give them some kind of signals. Fortunately I was able to blink my eyes. When the nurse saw my blinking eye, having remembered the similar patients' case shown on the TV, she came back with a sketch book and a pen. She quickly wrote alphabets on it. Then she said, "I'll go over the alphabets and you blink your eyes once when you want me to stop. I'll help you spell words you want to say, alright?" So, we started to talk in this way.
I asked her what had exactly happend to me. She said, I had fainted in the road and a stranger had robbed of my belongings. Then, As it was too dark, a truck hit me by accident. How unlucky I am! The worst thing ever never is I can't remember any of these. A happy thing of a misfortune, somebody discovered me and called 911. She said that's why I am here, hospital. Her telling was a hair-raising story and I got a goose bumps. But do you know what is lucky? I am still alive!!! Also, I realized how wrong I was during my life. I thought god punished me as having been lazy and addicted to drugs. I took his punishment in a humble way. I promised god and myself that I am going to get a medical trement hard and if he gives me another chance to go back to normal life, I will do my best to live a better life. After all of these thinking, I fell in sleep again, but at this time
soundly and happily.
-----------------------------♡Thanks for reading♡-------------------------
by Jeong Seong-Yoon, Ghost writer, Moon Nam-Suk, Kim Young-Ah, Kim Ji-Yong, Park Bo-Yun, Park Ji-Hyun
qqqqqqqqqqqqq (sorry, plz tell me your name)
Yesterday night, As soon as I got home after work, I tried to find some food.
Because I was so starving -at least I felt like that- I tried to make some finger food quickly. However, I couldn't find any clean dishes eventhough I was looking for it for several minutes. Since I hadn't washed the dishes for weeks, there was no containers to cook. Finally I gave up looking for the dishes and washing the dishes, decided to eat out with my friends.
But, unfortunately, I couldn't get in touch with any of my friends. It was getting darker and darker and
I was almost dying for hunger, so I gave up calling and went out alone to find something to eat. I was too exhausted, so that it was very hard to walk properly. Anyway, I walked and walked along the street.
And then...?? I can't remeber anything. When I opend my eyes it was in the morning. I was in a very strange place where I have never seen it before. I looked around carefully and found out it was hospital.
I found myself wearing a cast all over my body. I was so shocked and screamed. But I lost my voice so nobody answered to me.
I tried to organize my thoughts. I could guess something bad had happend to me. Frankly speaking, I am a drug addicted man. To be honest at this monent, I have to admit that what I really needed yesterday was drugs, not food. Several weeks have passed since my drug seller didn't give me any of them. I was insane. I made illusion in my mind and I couldn't recognize real or imaginary situation at that moment. I thought as if I was held in hostage by some stranger. Anyway... Sometime later, a nurse and a doctor came to see me.
But as I said before, I couldn't move my body and make any voice.
I trie to move my face muscles in order to give them some kind of signals. Fortunately I was able to blink my eyes. When the nurse saw my blinking eye, having remembered the similar patients' case shown on the TV, she came back with a sketch book and a pen. She quickly wrote alphabets on it. Then she said, "I'll go over the alphabets and you blink your eyes once when you want me to stop. I'll help you spell words you want to say, alright?" So, we started to talk in this way.
I asked her what had exactly happend to me. She said, I had fainted in the road and a stranger had robbed of my belongings. Then, As it was too dark, a truck hit me by accident. How unlucky I am! The worst thing ever never is I can't remember any of these. A happy thing of a misfortune, somebody discovered me and called 911. She said that's why I am here, hospital. Her telling was a hair-raising story and I got a goose bumps. But do you know what is lucky? I am still alive!!! Also, I realized how wrong I was during my life. I thought god punished me as having been lazy and addicted to drugs. I took his punishment in a humble way. I promised god and myself that I am going to get a medical trement hard and if he gives me another chance to go back to normal life, I will do my best to live a better life. After all of these thinking, I fell in sleep again, but at this time
soundly and happily.
-----------------------------♡Thanks for reading♡-------------------------
Last edited by jihyun on Mon Apr 14 2008, 13:39; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : better looking)

jihyun- Wizard

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Join date: 2008-03-13
"A Blind Date, how about it?"
"A Blind Date, how about it?"
titled by BoYun Park
[with JiHyun Park, HyeJin Lee, Oksun Jeong, SungHan Bae, YuJin Lee, YooJin Jung]
A beautiful and sunny Sunday in spring, there is a female sitting alone at home. Not washing her face and undressed, she just watch TV blanky. It's me who deadly want to have a great boyfriend. Having boyfriend, why don't I have a blind date?
Suddenly I got a call from my best friend J who is good looking and has a very good shape. She told me she wanted to set me up with a rich guy. (Acting J has just broken up with her boyfriend after seeing each other for 2 years. She said she doesn't want to meet any man for a moment.) She asked me to come to R cafe at 6 this Thursday. She suggested me to meet a guy there.
What a fantastic news, isn't it? There was no need to hesitate! The time has come. Today is Monday, I have three days left. How lucky woman I am ! Thanks to J, I could have a blind date! hmm... What should I do first? get a massage on my face? or get a hairdo? get a new clothes? Oh~~I can't wait to see the guy!!
Three days after,
Oh... last night, I have been watching TV a lot, because I can't sleep for worrying the first fantastic impression. Anyway, I went to beauty saloon and I asked hairdresser to make my hairdo as much beautiful as he can. As I couldn't have much sleep last night, I was drowsing and my head started to fall a bit. Few minutes later when I woke up..... oh my GOD! What the XXXX going on my hair????? He cut my hair half long unevenly because of my drowsy knocking!
Oh my godness! Only 30 minutes left. What should I do? As soon as I went out of the beauty saloon, I tried to find store. I nearly could buy one hat which could cover my hair. I just run to the R cafe without thinking. Just not to be late..... When I arrived....
There was a guy sitting in the middle of the restaurant. He was wearing a gloamorous hat. I walked toward him with frustration. When he looked at me, he loved my hairstyle. I wondered why he said like that. hmm... I was curious why he was also wearing hat though. By the time he took off his hat, I saw that. I saw...He was bald!!
That's why he loves my clumsy hairstyle. He likes every person who aren't bald.
That was the last time I ever had a blind date. I never have had a boyfriend since then. It was a horrible time to me and the best experience to me. By virtue of my friend J, I could become two children mother. Yes, even though he was bald, he was rich and humorous. I think I had right choice, don't you think so? Haha, anyway, I am happy now. And I realize that appearance is nothing especially for your spouse. I met my soul mate who is my husband. And I am happy with my family now.
titled by BoYun Park
[with JiHyun Park, HyeJin Lee, Oksun Jeong, SungHan Bae, YuJin Lee, YooJin Jung]
A beautiful and sunny Sunday in spring, there is a female sitting alone at home. Not washing her face and undressed, she just watch TV blanky. It's me who deadly want to have a great boyfriend. Having boyfriend, why don't I have a blind date?
Suddenly I got a call from my best friend J who is good looking and has a very good shape. She told me she wanted to set me up with a rich guy. (Acting J has just broken up with her boyfriend after seeing each other for 2 years. She said she doesn't want to meet any man for a moment.) She asked me to come to R cafe at 6 this Thursday. She suggested me to meet a guy there.
What a fantastic news, isn't it? There was no need to hesitate! The time has come. Today is Monday, I have three days left. How lucky woman I am ! Thanks to J, I could have a blind date! hmm... What should I do first? get a massage on my face? or get a hairdo? get a new clothes? Oh~~I can't wait to see the guy!!
Three days after,
Oh... last night, I have been watching TV a lot, because I can't sleep for worrying the first fantastic impression. Anyway, I went to beauty saloon and I asked hairdresser to make my hairdo as much beautiful as he can. As I couldn't have much sleep last night, I was drowsing and my head started to fall a bit. Few minutes later when I woke up..... oh my GOD! What the XXXX going on my hair????? He cut my hair half long unevenly because of my drowsy knocking!
Oh my godness! Only 30 minutes left. What should I do? As soon as I went out of the beauty saloon, I tried to find store. I nearly could buy one hat which could cover my hair. I just run to the R cafe without thinking. Just not to be late..... When I arrived....
There was a guy sitting in the middle of the restaurant. He was wearing a gloamorous hat. I walked toward him with frustration. When he looked at me, he loved my hairstyle. I wondered why he said like that. hmm... I was curious why he was also wearing hat though. By the time he took off his hat, I saw that. I saw...He was bald!!
That's why he loves my clumsy hairstyle. He likes every person who aren't bald.
That was the last time I ever had a blind date. I never have had a boyfriend since then. It was a horrible time to me and the best experience to me. By virtue of my friend J, I could become two children mother. Yes, even though he was bald, he was rich and humorous. I think I had right choice, don't you think so? Haha, anyway, I am happy now. And I realize that appearance is nothing especially for your spouse. I met my soul mate who is my husband. And I am happy with my family now.

Jung Yoojin- Wizard

- Posts: 77
Join date: 2008-03-12
Age: 29
what a nice superman~
Ryu Jeong A wrote:Bae Sung Han, Lee Kyeong Im, Lee Yu Jin, Jung Yoo Jin, Kim Sun Young, Park Mi Hyun, Hwang Yun Kyung, Ryu Jeong A.
People always missed and respected superman, because they were able to learn what justice is, what they should do for their neighbors, etc. Even they sometimes dreamed meeting him in their dreams. Now, it's time for their dreams to come true. One day...
Superman happened to appear in Daegu. He really wanted to explain he wasn't a difficult person to meet. Unfortunately, however, he could speak English only. Whenever he tried to help and talk to Daegu citizens, he was refused because they were afraid to speak in English. So, he thought something went wrong in English education of Daegu.
Later he felt he should renovate English education in Daegu. So, he decided to meet the mayor of Daegu. Meeting him and his aides, superman talked about the seriousness of English education and said he wanted to help them. Then they made an agreement to educate citizens by developing new English education system. For the sake of solving that problem together, superman became a CEO of English Education corporation.
Superman's business was such a success, but he suddenly disappeared. He was seriously thinking about his gender identity. In fact, Superman always admired wonder woman's shinning tiara. So, he decided to get a surgery.
The superman became a woman. Now, superman doesn't exist any longer.
People in Daegu Education Department was very surprised to find that superman had gone. They tried to find him using every possible way. They even made a UCC of finding superman. One day, a woman called to the mayor and told him that she knew where he was and wanted to make an appearance on air.
Finally, the mayor met her on live TV show. Amazingly, she was the very wonder woman and really gorgeous than expected. She said the shocking story to the public, "Actually, superman always said he wanted to be a woman. While helping the others make their dreams come true, he found himself that he also could make his dream of becoming a woman come true and in the end he made it However, as you know, most of the people dislike and disrespect the trans genders. That's why he, no, no, now 'she' can't show up to the public." Even before ending her remark, there came a lot of encouraging messages on the web eagerly hoping the comeback of the super woman. Seeing this, the mayor politely requested her coming back to Daegu, saying, "I think they are already ready to meet and accept the new hero." With a determined look, the wonder woman removed her fake mask and outfits, and then a brilliant figure appears, super woman. 'Superman' returned at last, with a different but more attractive look.

Jung Yoojin- Wizard

- Posts: 77
Join date: 2008-03-12
Age: 29
The Day I Met My Love-edited by Lee yujn
Kim jinyoung, Park boyun, Park jihyun,Lee hyejin, Jung oksun, Bea sunghan,
Lee kyungim, Lee yujin
December 2005, I was told to go to a cafe as 3 pm. I was running a little bit late, so took a taxi and hurried myself. The only thing I knew about the man was his name and age. There he was, looking a little bit older than I expected and drinking much water looking quite nervous.
Smiling with gentle, I said hello and sat down. He was trying to say something, but he was a liitle bit shy. So, I asked him some questions about himself. At that moment, my stomach was rumbling, so I was embarrassed. However, that changes all the situations. He laughed and asked me " why don't we get out of this boring cafe and have the most delicious lunch?"
"Yes. Why not?" I said. So he and I got out of there and went to a luxurious restaurant which is nearby the cafe. We sat and looked into each other's eyes. There was a huge and strong spark between us. We both thought we were a perfect match made in heaven. For 5 minutes, we didn't talk anything.
The atmosphere of the restaurant eas so fantastic. I felt so happy. At that moment, I heard a man coming near our table. He was sweating so much, and trying to catch his breath for some time. He said to me "Excuse me but, are you Miss X?"
I said, "Yes?" wondering who this guy was. He said, "Sorry for being late. I'm Mr.Y from TripleX company."
"What the hell....?"said I to myself in low voice 'And who is this guy from?' I probably made come kind of joke or somebody set me up in this situation. There were loads of rational ideas around my head which started to ache a bit. I didn't expect this mess. He asked me to join us, which was getting more awkawd.
We were very embarrassed because of Mr. Y. However, fortunately, gentle man whom I fell in love with understood this situation. He was so generous. Because of his good manner, I opened my heart to him more and more.
I was confused wondering what was really happening here. Mr. Y asked me "who is this guy you are talking with? and why did you move to here without letting me know?"
I finally lost my temper and shouted him" What I really want to ask you is that!, Who are you? Why did you suddenly come up and disturb my date?!." Suddenly the man I met in the cafe hold my arm. He slowly started to say "I'm sorry... I'm not the one you were supposed to meet, " I was totally shocked , "When I saw you running into the cafe, I thought that you were the one I really wanted. I mustn't loose you....so i pretended and acted like Mr. Y you were supposed to meet."
I felt somthing in my heat. He is the one I've been looking for...
Lee kyungim, Lee yujin
December 2005, I was told to go to a cafe as 3 pm. I was running a little bit late, so took a taxi and hurried myself. The only thing I knew about the man was his name and age. There he was, looking a little bit older than I expected and drinking much water looking quite nervous.
Smiling with gentle, I said hello and sat down. He was trying to say something, but he was a liitle bit shy. So, I asked him some questions about himself. At that moment, my stomach was rumbling, so I was embarrassed. However, that changes all the situations. He laughed and asked me " why don't we get out of this boring cafe and have the most delicious lunch?"
"Yes. Why not?" I said. So he and I got out of there and went to a luxurious restaurant which is nearby the cafe. We sat and looked into each other's eyes. There was a huge and strong spark between us. We both thought we were a perfect match made in heaven. For 5 minutes, we didn't talk anything.
The atmosphere of the restaurant eas so fantastic. I felt so happy. At that moment, I heard a man coming near our table. He was sweating so much, and trying to catch his breath for some time. He said to me "Excuse me but, are you Miss X?"
I said, "Yes?" wondering who this guy was. He said, "Sorry for being late. I'm Mr.Y from TripleX company."
"What the hell....?"said I to myself in low voice 'And who is this guy from?' I probably made come kind of joke or somebody set me up in this situation. There were loads of rational ideas around my head which started to ache a bit. I didn't expect this mess. He asked me to join us, which was getting more awkawd.
We were very embarrassed because of Mr. Y. However, fortunately, gentle man whom I fell in love with understood this situation. He was so generous. Because of his good manner, I opened my heart to him more and more.
I was confused wondering what was really happening here. Mr. Y asked me "who is this guy you are talking with? and why did you move to here without letting me know?"
I finally lost my temper and shouted him" What I really want to ask you is that!, Who are you? Why did you suddenly come up and disturb my date?!." Suddenly the man I met in the cafe hold my arm. He slowly started to say "I'm sorry... I'm not the one you were supposed to meet, " I was totally shocked , "When I saw you running into the cafe, I thought that you were the one I really wanted. I mustn't loose you....so i pretended and acted like Mr. Y you were supposed to meet."
I felt somthing in my heat. He is the one I've been looking for...

Lee yujin- Wizard

- Posts: 61
Join date: 2008-03-13
I think it's a funny story.
Liz wrote:By Jeong Oksun, Bae Sunghan, Lee Kyeongim, Lee Yujin, Jung Yoojin, Kim Sunyoung, Park Mihyun, Hwang Yunkyoung
It was a bright and sunny day. I wouldn't get this kind of weather again in my entire life. It was also the day that I met J. She was sitting next to me and such a sweet girl that I'd always dreamed of. We were sitting in a car to the airport which was decorated with lots of flowers. We were heading for the island which had the most beautiful scenary in the world. My heart was beating rapidly for excitement.
After we arrived at the island, we had a great lunch and enjoyed sunshine walking along the beach. I was so sure that we would fall in love. Everything was so perfect to be true.
Suddenly it started to rain heavily with thunderstorm. We had no place to get away from the rain. She got wet and started to shiver. I came up with an idea of making her a special umbrella. However, no matter how I made them, she threw them right away. She didn't like any of them.
How could she do this to me! I couldn't stand it any longer. I hate people make me angry. So I stabbed her several times with the very knife that I used for making the umbrellas and threw the body away in the ocean. That night, I was arrested by interpol. I couldn't understand how they found me that quickly. We were isolated in this island. Were we not alone?
I would escape from this island! One of the police officers, who was female, fell in love with me at first sight. I knew it wasn't right to use her feeling but I persuaded her to help me run away. However, she was murdered by her co-worker, ex-boyfriend. He was so annoyed to find out that she had feelings for me and lost his temper while they were arguing.
I was locked in a room for days, but they didn't find any evidence of accusing me. Finally, I would get my freedom back, I would be released, today.
Now, I'm home. It took quite a long time to figure out what had happened to me. I thought I was a human but I wasn't. I was just a brand new cyborg which could think and feel. J was my master and I was supposed to protect her. On the contrary, I killed her. Then the alarm system in my body alerted the interpol. That's how they found me. The manufacturer recalled me to find out what caused this fatal error and my body is falling apart into pieces. After all, I survived from the island.
with your excllent editing, this sotry became more intersting

Lee yujin- Wizard

- Posts: 61
Join date: 2008-03-13
What the Rule NO.1 ?
Titled by Jang Deuk-Ju
wrriten by Jung Mi-Jin / Kim Eun-jung / Kim Ji-young / Joo un-jin / Kim bo-yeum / Kim Hyo-jin / Jung Ji-eun
There were two pretty girls at the same class of the same schoo. They always said that they were good friends each other and were together anywhere. And both of them were very popular with other students because of their beauty.
A boy transfered to this schoo. He was tall, handsome, smart and from a very rich family. All of the girls in the school liked him. But he was a little arrogant. Oe of the two pretty girls wanted to be a girl friend of him, and the other hated him because of his arrogance.
Then, the boy, named Tom and the girls, Sally and Cindy cam to attend the same class, so they made friends with each other But there was a problem. Sally liked Tom from the beginning, but it seemed like Tom was not interested in her at all. Rather, Tom was more interested in the other girl, Cindy, who didn't like Tom at first because she thought he was arrogant.
Finally, Tom deciede to propose Cinty, although she wasn't familiar with him. But that day, he overheard his mom say that Cindy was his sister and he was destined to marry Sally. How shocking it was! And what did fortune do to them? He couldn't accept that and told her mom what had happened to him. His mother was shocked also. She wanted to keep it a secret that Tom had another sister.
Even though Cindy is Tom's sister, he couldn't accpet it. It makes him hurt his heard. He cried every night, couldn't eat anything. So his mom also worried about him. Fortunately, his mom suggested good solution to him.
Tom's mom had hard time as well watching his agony. So she suggedted asking Cindy out first and going out with her if she likes him. And in case they got into deel love, they could leave their own contry. Tom agreed to his mom's opinion. He had to find out what was in Cindy's mind.
He prepared lots of things for Cindy. He had to get her love for both of them. At that day, they met finally, and Tom said everything to her honestly. Cindy was almost faint at the first time, of course it was really big deal to handle for her. But fortunately, she accepted him, too. They made a decision to leave their own country. They chosed the way to be happy for them. They made their destiny by themsleves and have a happy ending forever.
wrriten by Jung Mi-Jin / Kim Eun-jung / Kim Ji-young / Joo un-jin / Kim bo-yeum / Kim Hyo-jin / Jung Ji-eun
There were two pretty girls at the same class of the same schoo. They always said that they were good friends each other and were together anywhere. And both of them were very popular with other students because of their beauty.
A boy transfered to this schoo. He was tall, handsome, smart and from a very rich family. All of the girls in the school liked him. But he was a little arrogant. Oe of the two pretty girls wanted to be a girl friend of him, and the other hated him because of his arrogance.
Then, the boy, named Tom and the girls, Sally and Cindy cam to attend the same class, so they made friends with each other But there was a problem. Sally liked Tom from the beginning, but it seemed like Tom was not interested in her at all. Rather, Tom was more interested in the other girl, Cindy, who didn't like Tom at first because she thought he was arrogant.
Finally, Tom deciede to propose Cinty, although she wasn't familiar with him. But that day, he overheard his mom say that Cindy was his sister and he was destined to marry Sally. How shocking it was! And what did fortune do to them? He couldn't accept that and told her mom what had happened to him. His mother was shocked also. She wanted to keep it a secret that Tom had another sister.
Even though Cindy is Tom's sister, he couldn't accpet it. It makes him hurt his heard. He cried every night, couldn't eat anything. So his mom also worried about him. Fortunately, his mom suggested good solution to him.
Tom's mom had hard time as well watching his agony. So she suggedted asking Cindy out first and going out with her if she likes him. And in case they got into deel love, they could leave their own contry. Tom agreed to his mom's opinion. He had to find out what was in Cindy's mind.
He prepared lots of things for Cindy. He had to get her love for both of them. At that day, they met finally, and Tom said everything to her honestly. Cindy was almost faint at the first time, of course it was really big deal to handle for her. But fortunately, she accepted him, too. They made a decision to leave their own country. They chosed the way to be happy for them. They made their destiny by themsleves and have a happy ending forever.

Ji-eun- Flyer

- Posts: 31
Join date: 2008-03-19
" My Dear Grandmother"
Witten by Kim Sunyoung, Park Mihyun, Hwang Yunkyoung, Ryu Jeonga, Park Bongkyung, Lee Pilsu, Bae Haesol, Kang Eunmi
My Dear Grandmother
I have a wonderful grander who is over 100 years old. She is amazingly healthy and young. I like her very much.
If people ask me why I like her, I can give them millions of reasons. But the most important reason is this; She is my grandmother. I'm very happy to have such a wise grandmother. She is my friend, teacher, mother and grandmother.
I still live with my grandma. She still cares for her grandsons and daughters. Sometimes, I and my grandma go to play bingo games. There, many people ask me if she is my mother. Then I tell them just she is my sister.
One day, taking my kids to school, I went back to school expecting a nice happy chat with my grandma. I rang the door bell and opened the front door. There stood a strange woman that I had never seen before. I wondered who this woman was. I asked her " Excuse me, who are you? Have you seen my grandma?" Then the lady answered, "Oh, my sweet little puppy, I'm your grandma. Are you joking? Did you take kids to school?" What had happened to her and to me? I had no idea who she was. Something weird very spooky things must have happened.
So I asked her several questions to see if she is really my grandmother. In the beginning I thought she is a crazy woman saying that she is my grandmother. But as I asked her many family-related questions, she answered them all correctly. She even remember that I had a scar in my leg that I had got from being beaten bu a dog. Amazingly she remembered everything from beginning to the end. I looked at her face closely. Surely, she resembled my mother and me.
But she looked so much younger that her age. I was so confused. Smiling brightly, my grandmother started explaining. The Story was like this; when my mom was killed by the car accident, my grand mother was there too. But both my mom and grandmother got killed. My grandmother and my mom were so sad that they couldn't go to the haven. So they decided to take care of me. That's why there were my mom and my grandmother always. They are ghost!
Actually I know that my story sounds a little weird. But I can feel their love wherever I am like the air. I just feel that I had a sweet dream of them. Even though my mom and grandmother are with me as ghosts, I love them so much. Even, I can trust them more than anyone who are around me. For this reason, I'm the most happiest person in the world. Are you guys with these kinds of people all the time, huh?
My Dear Grandmother
I have a wonderful grander who is over 100 years old. She is amazingly healthy and young. I like her very much.
If people ask me why I like her, I can give them millions of reasons. But the most important reason is this; She is my grandmother. I'm very happy to have such a wise grandmother. She is my friend, teacher, mother and grandmother.
I still live with my grandma. She still cares for her grandsons and daughters. Sometimes, I and my grandma go to play bingo games. There, many people ask me if she is my mother. Then I tell them just she is my sister.
One day, taking my kids to school, I went back to school expecting a nice happy chat with my grandma. I rang the door bell and opened the front door. There stood a strange woman that I had never seen before. I wondered who this woman was. I asked her " Excuse me, who are you? Have you seen my grandma?" Then the lady answered, "Oh, my sweet little puppy, I'm your grandma. Are you joking? Did you take kids to school?" What had happened to her and to me? I had no idea who she was. Something weird very spooky things must have happened.
So I asked her several questions to see if she is really my grandmother. In the beginning I thought she is a crazy woman saying that she is my grandmother. But as I asked her many family-related questions, she answered them all correctly. She even remember that I had a scar in my leg that I had got from being beaten bu a dog. Amazingly she remembered everything from beginning to the end. I looked at her face closely. Surely, she resembled my mother and me.
But she looked so much younger that her age. I was so confused. Smiling brightly, my grandmother started explaining. The Story was like this; when my mom was killed by the car accident, my grand mother was there too. But both my mom and grandmother got killed. My grandmother and my mom were so sad that they couldn't go to the haven. So they decided to take care of me. That's why there were my mom and my grandmother always. They are ghost!
Actually I know that my story sounds a little weird. But I can feel their love wherever I am like the air. I just feel that I had a sweet dream of them. Even though my mom and grandmother are with me as ghosts, I love them so much. Even, I can trust them more than anyone who are around me. For this reason, I'm the most happiest person in the world. Are you guys with these kinds of people all the time, huh?

Kang Eunmi- Flyer

- Posts: 40
Join date: 2008-03-13
nice writing!
kiera wrote:How to Get Along with a Stranger
by Ji-Hyun Park, Hye-Jin Lee, Ok-Sun Jeung, Sung-han Bae, Kyeong-Jin Lee, Yu-Jin Lee, Yoo-Jin Jung and Sun-Young Kim.
It's really difficult to get along with strangers. The first thing you should do is to memorize some jokes to break the ice between you and a stranger. Once you have some small talk and break the ice with him/her, you'll feel less stressful about getting along with strangers. The second one you should do is to be open-minded. Since we're all human being, we all have something common.
First of all, Start talking with some questions like "What a nice weather!" , "What do you usually do on weekends?"" or "I've been to Japan. Have you ever been to any foreign countries?". This could be one of the safest way to start conversation. Then you can find that the strangers who you are talking with and yourself are getting to feel more comfortable.
However, there is a subtle difference between man and woman in choosing the conversation topics. Here are some additional tips for starting conversation, especially for man. For example, woman and man have different point of views. If man wants to get along with a woman, just start with her favorite things, which man must get information at the beginning of conversation. Relatively, woman are interested in the emotional and detail subjects such as cooking or happiest time, something like that.
Secondly, you should be more open-minded when you first start a conversation with a stranger. Here is an interesting episode. One day, a woman has a chance to get along with a stranger, a beautiful woman. In order to break the ice, she says something emotional. Unfortunately, the beautiful woman doesn't seem to understand what she says and doesn't feel interested at all. She gets embarrassed. Actually, the beautiful girl was man in the past and even worse, she is not able to hear because of illness.
She is really angry with this beautiful girl, because she doesn't know about the girl's secrets. She is so upset, so she hits the girl. The girl calls the police, but it takes a long time for the police to arrive.
So these two people inevitably tries breaking the ice, now in a different way. She finds that the beautiful girl is unable to hear so she apologizes to the girl for hitting her. The girl accepts her apology and introduces herself again through writing. Now, she realizes that the girl is a transgender and she is a good person, and they become friends.
As you can see, breaking the ice is the most important thing when you met a stranger. In order to interact with a stranger better, you should choose normal and safe topics. You can prepare a common jokes or a small talk about weather. In addition, you should be more open-minded since there are various kinds of people in different situations. That is, breaking the ice should be based on understanding with each other. I hope these tips should be helpful for you.- The End -
This writing is so useful to anyone who wants to be sociable. Actually I'm not that kind of person but just try to be. I think that all men are likely to feel the same way even if there are some degree of individual differences in them. In this respect, all those comments are really beneficial to most students. Thanks for giving it and make it well connected!

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good story!
Lee yujin wrote:Kim jinyoung, Park boyun, Park jihyun,Lee hyejin, Jung oksun, Bea sunghan,
Lee kyungim, Lee yujin
December 2005, I was told to go to a cafe as 3 pm. I was running a little bit late, so took a taxi and hurried myself. The only thing I knew about the man was his name and age. There he was, looking a little bit older than I expected and drinking much water looking quite nervous.
Smiling with gentle, I said hello and sat down. He was trying to say something, but he was a liitle bit shy. So, I asked him some questions about himself. At that moment, my stomach was rumbling, so I was embarrassed. However, that changes all the situations. He laughed and asked me " why don't we get out of this boring cafe and have the most delicious lunch?"
"Yes. Why not?" I said. So he and I got out of there and went to a luxurious restaurant which is nearby the cafe. We sat and looked into each other's eyes. There was a huge and strong spark between us. We both thought we were a perfect match made in heaven. For 5 minutes, we didn't talk anything.
The atmosphere of the restaurant eas so fantastic. I felt so happy. At that moment, I heard a man coming near our table. He was sweating so much, and trying to catch his breath for some time. He said to me "Excuse me but, are you Miss X?"
I said, "Yes?" wondering who this guy was. He said, "Sorry for being late. I'm Mr.Y from TripleX company."
"What the hell....?"said I to myself in low voice 'And who is this guy from?' I probably made come kind of joke or somebody set me up in this situation. There were loads of rational ideas around my head which started to ache a bit. I didn't expect this mess. He asked me to join us, which was getting more awkawd.
We were very embarrassed because of Mr. Y. However, fortunately, gentle man whom I fell in love with understood this situation. He was so generous. Because of his good manner, I opened my heart to him more and more.
I was confused wondering what was really happening here. Mr. Y asked me "who is this guy you are talking with? and why did you move to here without letting me know?"
I finally lost my temper and shouted him" What I really want to ask you is that!, Who are you? Why did you suddenly come up and disturb my date?!." Suddenly the man I met in the cafe hold my arm. He slowly started to say "I'm sorry... I'm not the one you were supposed to meet, " I was totally shocked , "When I saw you running into the cafe, I thought that you were the one I really wanted. I mustn't loose you....so i pretended and acted like Mr. Y you were supposed to meet."
I felt somthing in my heat. He is the one I've been looking for...
This story started from me, which means I only wrote the title. With this reason, I feel like to reading it. Actually this title didn't come out of my own idea, but Jason's. I'm glad to read this story. The embarrassed event is so unexpected and unusual.
As my elder sister has been fixed up with a man, I heard from her that a certain guy had several appointments for the purpose of finding out the perfect woman in a day, even in the same cafe! Anyway, if I were the girl, I would meet two guys one by one. Is it somewhat ridiculous? There's no 100% possibility that the right guy is perfect match for you instead of the other guy. As far as I have a chance to, I would do it.

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"Why Not ? Who cares? title by Bae hae sol
joined by Kang Eun Mi , Han kyung jae , Kim hyun jin, Yoo bin cha and Park sang young.
I fell in love with a handsome and sexy guy in New York . Actually my parents are very old school even in Korea , so that I coun not see any chance to get a boyfriend so far. bUT as soon as I touched downed in the Big Apple i got reaaly hot one. Who cares ? No survelliance cam from my mom and dad. We jumped into the bed at the very firsrt date. Do you think it's crazy. You may think I am the girl who gives the impression that just got out if everyone's bed. But it's not true , and who cares? We stated to live togther from the very next day we met.
Here is why you should do this. Hey check this out. This isn't something you can learn from the school. If you want to be a cool guy and cool girl in this cosmopolitan city just listen. First, I Had to check whetehr is belong to this planet earth. No wants to have relationship with alien . Next I was penniless . In Nw York, being short of money is no joke.
If you choosed to live alone , you need much money to spend. So sharing the flat with roomate is
good way to save your money. You can spend more time with your be-loved guy as well.
That's the great thing. Unlike Korea, in weatern culture living together is not a taboo . It's part of thier life style and I like it.
Besides these money things, you won't be lonely, because you have someone to talk and someone who is going to listen to you . And you will learn how to cope with typical wife and husband problem.
The another boy I met was not a blue -eyed. He was student of high profile college and koean like me. He was a diffrent from other dudes I met before. I could not take my eyes off him.
So I made up my mind to apprached to him. Yes I came to him . We started to live together in a small apartment. We had lovely days in this city. But , one day I woke up at deep night . I heard somone mummering in the nextroom . I saw him running in the air with his eyes cloesd. He was trying to contact to outside. What the hack.. MIB WAS NOT joke?
joined by Kang Eun Mi , Han kyung jae , Kim hyun jin, Yoo bin cha and Park sang young.
I fell in love with a handsome and sexy guy in New York . Actually my parents are very old school even in Korea , so that I coun not see any chance to get a boyfriend so far. bUT as soon as I touched downed in the Big Apple i got reaaly hot one. Who cares ? No survelliance cam from my mom and dad. We jumped into the bed at the very firsrt date. Do you think it's crazy. You may think I am the girl who gives the impression that just got out if everyone's bed. But it's not true , and who cares? We stated to live togther from the very next day we met.
Here is why you should do this. Hey check this out. This isn't something you can learn from the school. If you want to be a cool guy and cool girl in this cosmopolitan city just listen. First, I Had to check whetehr is belong to this planet earth. No wants to have relationship with alien . Next I was penniless . In Nw York, being short of money is no joke.
If you choosed to live alone , you need much money to spend. So sharing the flat with roomate is
good way to save your money. You can spend more time with your be-loved guy as well.
That's the great thing. Unlike Korea, in weatern culture living together is not a taboo . It's part of thier life style and I like it.
Besides these money things, you won't be lonely, because you have someone to talk and someone who is going to listen to you . And you will learn how to cope with typical wife and husband problem.
The another boy I met was not a blue -eyed. He was student of high profile college and koean like me. He was a diffrent from other dudes I met before. I could not take my eyes off him.
So I made up my mind to apprached to him. Yes I came to him . We started to live together in a small apartment. We had lovely days in this city. But , one day I woke up at deep night . I heard somone mummering in the nextroom . I saw him running in the air with his eyes cloesd. He was trying to contact to outside. What the hack.. MIB WAS NOT joke?

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Re: Twisty-turny stories (engaging practical writing activity)
Oksun wrote:No More Happy Endings ~!
written by Kim Hyojin,Moon Namsuk, Kim Youngah, Kim Jinyoug,Park Boyun, Park Jihyn and Lee Hyejin
Everybody likes "happy ending"story in real life or even soap operas on TV. It's like everybody's hope in their lives, so we wish main actor and actress can get together even if they met with an accident or some difficulties.
Sometimes we are told the saying,"No pain, No gain." So perhaps many people like "happy ending" much more after they experienced some bad things. But I think "happy ending" is a little boring idea in a movie or soap operas. Even a korean movie "Happy Enging" didn't show real happy ending.
Therefore ,we need something opposite to "happy ending" like pitiful lives or psychotic stories. These kinds of movies really sound interesting to us. Like "Prison Break", there is a movie which has a lot of brutal scenes. Despite those bad things, most of viewers are crazy about it. Many critics question the morality of those topics, though.
By the way, korean TV dramas and movies tend to be made in a quite different way . They let the viewers choose and make the story. Whenever they needed next stories or synopses, they would ask viewers on phones or by internet to make a decision. So all dramas and movies turned out quite crazy , depending on how koreans are feeling or thinking during those votes(votes about the next episode.)
But you know what? People started to blame the writer for being undecisive. Now people want to have a special story which is based on the writer's creative work, not on public opinions. What do you think the writers should do? Which one is better? To keep asking audience or do on their own? We need to find a solution, without spending much money getting that answer. I'm of the opinion that it's up to the writer's creativity.
Yes. Writers should be as creative as possible. When we watch TV dramas or see movies, we can easily notice what's going on, what will happen next ,who will be dead and who will be happy in the end. We don't want to see boring and obvious endings anymore. I mean, we are sick and tired of some thing like " ~~lived happily ever after."
Writers! Try to think outside of the box. You can be very imaginative and amazing writers. Do not rely on featuring famous actors and actresses for making a big hit.
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so interesting. :)
Lee Pilsu wrote:"The Best Birthday Party in Life"
(Jung Yoo-jin, Kim Sun-young, Park Mi-hyun, Hwang Yun-kyoung, Ryu Jeong-a, Park Bong-kyeong)
There was a lovely house in a deep forest. It was decorated with very delicious biscuits and chocolate. I had lived there for twenty years with my mom and dad. It was a Sunday morning, and it was also my birthday. All of the animals in the forest came to my birthday party.
Since I was five, I've always wanted to communicate with animals. But it seems to be very difficult to learn animals language. I picked up only a few phrases. But still I couldn't understand a thing when the animals speak each other. My parents, however, were excellent at speaking animal's language. It was a complete mystery to me how come they are good at it while I am not.
It was sad that I couldn't speak animal's language. I was the only one who couldn't. Although all the animals in the neighborhood came over to my place to celebrate my birthday, I couldn't talk with them. They approached to me, giving me presents, saying "blablabla", which I interpreted as "Happy Birthday" from the context of speaking. Although I was so happy to receive gifts from them, I couldn't continue the conversation with them no longer. All the words they were speaking sounded like all the same "blablabla." If I turn this way, I could hear "blabla", and if I turn that way, another "blablabla"
What on earth those "blabla" mean? With no one to talk to, I felt alone. I decided to hide in the closet. When they find that I was missing, they will feel sorry for neglecting me. That's what I thought. I was not just pretending. I was really lonely, indeed. However the closet I was in was so dark and smelled bad. What's worse I found myself locked inside. I got puzzled. I let out a cry and called for help. No one came. Soon I got tired and fell asleep, murmuring to myself "blablablabla"
In my dream, a big black pig came over me and asked me what presents I wanted to be given. So I preyed to him, 'Please, let me also have the special ability to talk with the other animals.' Then surprisingly the big black pig turned to a small white pig. At that moment, I felt somebody shaking me and I woke up. It was just a dream.
It was my mom who found me. I went to the dinner table with my mom. On that table I saw the exactly same white pig that I had seen in my dream. 'What a coincidence,' I said to myself. When my mom was trying to cut the pig with a sharp knife, I called out at top of my voice to my mom, "Please, don't eat it, mom. It's the pig I've seen in my dream. it had promised to give me the power to communicate with animals." After hearing my explanation, my dad who was the best animal language speaker ever, had a surprised look on his face. He was awe-struck, his eyes and mouth wide open. I couldn't get why he was so surprised like that. I continued explaining my dream and now all the animals turned to me with the same shocked expression on their faces. I still couldn't understand why. My mother came to me and said, "How did you become so fluent in animal's language all of sudden?" Now my father said, "You were explaining your dream, or whatsoever, in ANIMAL'S LANGUAGE." Now the animals all chorused rejoicingly, "Miracle Happened. This Kid Now Speaks Our Language"
I was jumping with joy. After several years listening to animal's language, I had thought I failed to learn it. Now all over sudden, it paid off and I can speak the language as well as understanding it. It wasn't for nothing that I was exposed to animal's speaking "blablabla" for the painfully long time.
At 11 in the evening, when every guest returned to their home, I lied down on my stomach on my bed, thinking the unbelievable change in me. I thought about the white pig that changed from the black pig in my dream. Maybe the color "dark" means that I can't understand the animal's language, and "white" means that I got enlightened from my ignorance. Before go to sleep I broke off a white chocolate instead of black one from my bed which was all made of chocolate, and popped it into my mouth and smiled. 'Well, at first I thought today was the worst birthday in my life, but turned out to be the best birthday party in my life.'
It's related to a animal language. I thought the reason this story is so interesting to all of us is that we usually imagine what happened in the story. In other words, it reminds me of cartoons which is just like one I watched every Sunday early morning before my entering elementary school. It was my all during my childhood.
Sometimes, I felt in the same way. I like little kids, specially newly born babies. With holding a baby in my arms, I would like to talk with him or her and understand his murmuring sounds. If it happened, It could be so funny. You know, their sayings are absurd or unexpectable. Anyway it's just my own imagination. It was a fun time to enjoy it!

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kim young-ah wrote:Titled by Kim Ji-Young, Written by Joo Un-Jin, Kim Bo-Yeun, Kim Hyo-Jin,Jung Ji-Eun, Jung Sung-Yoon, Moon Nam-Suk and Kim Young-Ah.
One day, I met a magician. He said, "I'll give you anything that you want. But you must keep it a secret." First I laughed at him and thought he was making fool of me. I just said, "Be my servant." I was just joking , thinking he was very strange. But he was so serious and said, "OK. I will be your servant. But you must not tell it to anybody."
And he said to me, "If you reveal the secret, you have to be my servant and you should do whatever I want." "OK. Sure. No problem." I said. I wanted the magician to make everything that I wanted. As time went by, I felt that the magic was not interesting any more to me, so I decided to become a magician, thinking that I could do anything and get anything including a servant.
So, I called the magician and asked him " Hey, servant! I want to be a magician just like you. Can you help me?" Then, he seemed to be thinking about it for a second and accepted it. But he suggested to me one condition.
"Of course, I can make you a magician. But, you have to go to the HOGWARTS school and study there. You know why? It is the time to follow your destiny. You were destined to be a great magician, Harry Potter!" I couldn't say anything in front of him. Am I Harry Potter?
"Yes. " he said. "Even though I go to HOGWARTS school alone, and if I got the more magic power and I were a magician, it wouldn't matter to me at all." I thought. "OK! I'll try but what if I go there with my best friend. I'm afraid of the loneliness."
"That's one of your duties that you have to overcome." he said. I was quite curious about that, but I wasn't quite sure whether I could handle this situation alone at the same time. Therefore I called my best friend to get her opinion after thinking about it for several days. She said that she'd be willing to go with me because she knew very well how scared I would be in my being alone. Suddenly, the magician appeared, and said "OK. You've my servant from now."
At the moment, I was at a loss. As soon as I became his servant, I was made to catch up with him, to run with a bus, to clean up his laboratory, etc..... Finally, I had the difficulties done, as he ordered. But, without knowing myself, I had already arrived at HOGWARTS school and I had finished the magic course. What happened to my best friend? Nowhere she was. I cried and cried. Just then someone hit my back. She was....
She was.... my MOM. "Why don't you get up and wash your face? Be late for school. Hurry up!" All was a dream. Ha ha ha.
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Re: Twisty-turny stories (engaging practical writing activity)
Bae Sung-han wrote:Unexpected Day
(titled by Lee Kyeong-im)
(Yu-jin Lee, Yoo-jin Jung, Sun-young Kim, Mi-hyun Park, Yun-kyoung Hwang, Ok-sun Jeong, Sung-han Bae)
I woke up late in the morning, feeling very tired. I called mom, but there was no answer. I also called my brother, no answer, either. I came to realize that there wasn't anyone in the house. I looked up the clock which was hanging in the dining room, but it was gone. I thought someone must have stolen everything in the house except for the bed I had been lying.
HOW IT COULD BE POSSIBLE!
Then, suddenly a handsome and gorgeous guy appeared in front of me. and he asked me, "Would you like to marry me?" How odd he was! At the first sight, he gave me a propose, kneeling before me. My mind tried to say, "No, not at all," but my mouth was moving in a different way I'd like to respond. In a split second, I was saying, "Yes, I would. I'd love to." And I followed him to his place. As a matter of fact, he was the prince of a mysterious world, who was awesome and handsome.
However, something happened to us. it was a bit cloudy all day and at last in the later afternoon it started to rain slightly. And the drops was hitting this windows upon the ceiling. It was after the thunder splashed in the air of dark night. The handsome prince began to scream like the roar of lion and changed into a poorly old, ugly man. He tried to covered his appearance with his arms, stepping backward to avoid my eyes. And then, "I'm so sorry,” said he like he talked to himself. He mumbled, "I, actually, was cursed by a witch who he had dated with." But I could hear him as enough as I said to myself.
Poor prince... I wanted to help him to regain his appearance, so that I firmly told him, "I will meet the witch to figure out what you have got." I, by myself, went to the witch's place where was located in the suburb of the town. It wasn't far way from the castle. It took 2 day horse-riding time for me to get there. The place which the prince directed me to get there wasn't not worse than I had expected. I walked slowly to the door and knocked three times. There was no response and I knocked again. But no answer again. But I could feel something behind. It was a bit spooky somehow, but not bad though. The witch was behind me, clearing her throat and saying to me,
"Who are you? What brought you here?"
I'd like to be straight, so I asked her why she had done to the prince and how much he was suffering.
And then, her response was not different from what I had expected. After discussing, she told me that the prince was a playboy.
And she explained that all he says was lie. She also went through the same experience as mine. Long time ago, when she had woken up in her own house, there had been nothing left in it. And suddenly he had appeared. He even proposed to her. During the conversation, I could feel the anger growing up to my brain and decided to revenge him.
On my way back to the castle, I was thinking about how I could revenge him effectively. The prince appeared and said,
"How did it go? Did you meet the witch?"
"Yes," I said, "Straight with you, I love you but I can't marry you."
"Why not?" he asked me with surprise and suspicion.
"She doesn't want me to get married to you. She still loves you." I mentioned as if I had felt disappointed and there had been nobody helping.
"No way," he cried.
After that, I tried to run away from him, but I couldn't move at all.
At the moment, I heard my mom calling my name.
"Alice, are you still sleeping?"
When I opened my eyes in my own bed, looked around my room and found out what I had dreamt of, I was so relieved. My pyjama was totally soaked with much of sweat and my body seemed to have no energy left, so I put my head on my pillow again. My face was a bit smiling with relief, hearing from mom's calling for me to get up once again. I moved my body up, thinking not to have such a horrible dream and a disgusting man in a real world.
It was a brightly sunny day, with the birds singing around out of the window nearby my bed.- The End -
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